Audio is excellent. Levels are all pretty level and your interviews sound great. I love the nat sounds as well from your b-roll clips. There does seem to be one audio clip that shouldn't be in there towards the end. You can hear someone saying part of a word and it comes in during a sound bite.
Overall it's a good story but it still needs work. There are clips you've included that only tell part of the story. I wanted to know more about the "3700 learners from around the islands" and what they did. That fact was not expanded on. What happened to the Kalo Festival? I know it was rescheduled but was there any way to go out there on the new day to get some footage?
Your latest script doesn't match the opening clip of Stacy talking. I don't think this clip you used works very well because it's not clear what she's saying. I can hear her well, it's not about not being able to understand what she's saying but it's more that I don't understand the context of what she said and how it pertains to your story. I liked the other opening better. Did I ask you to change that first clip? I love the chanting at the start although the side profile is not the greatest angle for that.
It's a pretty good story but it needs more work. 3.5 points
Hi my name Kate and this is my first year in the CKTV media productions class!