Message isn't quite clear in the finished product. How does those words get on her hand? I know we talked about it in class but when it was filmed, I guess I had a hard time seeing how those words got on her hand. She never really acknowledges it either. She not once looks at it or is horrified at it somehow appearing on her arm. I think if she noticed it and then tried to rub it off that would have made it clearer. That last example of the students laughing isn't clear that they are laughing at her. She is just looking at them. They aren't really doing anything to her but the words got darker. Audio was pretty good and I like how you used close ups on her face. Shots were solid and sequenced properly. Be careful when coming up with the ending message. You tried so hard to make it rhyme that it just sounds weird. Blurt? Do most people know what that means? You are also asking a question and a question mark is missing in the title. Overall a pretty good job that needs a little work to make it clearer. 3.4 points
Hi my name Kate and this is my first year in the CKTV media productions class!