We talked about this in class and I think you're on to something here. I like the way the words get darker and darker as they are reinforced. The only thing to think about changing is the ending. I don't think "sold" is the right word here. I think that might confuse people because nothing is being bought. Let's work on that and get this reworded. Good to great!
Hi my name Kate and this is my first year in the CKTV media productions class!