Ahh oh my gosh this is so cute. Thank you so much for chosing me to do your profile on. It was totally awesome working with you and you did a bomb job on this. I'm very proud 😹😊💛💜
When doing a personal profile you want to tell the story about someone and it should include a beginning, middle, and ending. I won't knock you guys too much for your story because it looks like I didn't do a good enough job in explaining this to you. You don't want to include things like her saying and spelling her name. That's just for you to use for a lower third graphic. We don't actually want that in the video. The interview sounds great and it looks pretty good. It's a hair out of focus though. The background is not distracting. What is lacking here is more b-roll. I need more footage of her doing the things she's talking about. You do have some footage here but it's not nearly enough. Those b-roll shots would break up your interview shots so that we don't see so many jump cuts. Let's work on these things for the next project. 3 points
Hi my name Kate and this is my first year in the CKTV media productions class!